I’ve seen results of several tests proving that using Courier in fundraising letters lifts response. Old news now, I hope.
For a decade now, I’ve seen 14′ Courier lift response repeatedly on fundraising letters, too. BIG HORSEY LOOKS WEIRD 14′ COURIER.
First time was a decade ago, for an association protecting retirement benefits. Ok. Makes sense. They have weak eyesight.
For the last couple of years, 14′ repeatedly wins with less obvious audiences, not necessarily 80+ years of age.
Makes sense though. We use simple language NOT because our readers are simple-minded, but because it’s EASIER TO READ. Bright folks just read it even faster.
And I’ll speculate that 14′ is real easy for those with weak eyesight and simply EASIER TO READ for those who don’t need correction just yet.
The reminder comes in a letter from World Wildlife Fund (who I feel like I’m single-handedly supporting with my adoptions/acquisition of plush animals.)
The package was for Legacy Gifts, nicely from Legacy Gifts identified right above the name on the envelope corner card.
I usually argue that brochures hurt fundraising mail response. That said, this had a good continuous theme of “help save life on Earth” demonstrated with a full-color legacy giving brochure, with a big headline “Giving to WWF Through a Will or Other Estate Plan” — it’s great that they’re very clear what this is about. I’m not kidding with that point.
Finally, my point: The brochure was entirely in HUGE FONTS. At least 14′. Some 16′ or bigger.
Very odd to my overly sensitive sensibilities, most of the copy is in huge Times Roman, lapsing to huge sans serif font moving into types of bequest info and suggested bequest language. No reason to shift fonts apparent to me.
So the brochure was right in so many ways. Straightforward. To the point. And all BIG FONTS.
But I must wonder why the letter was in a 12′ serif font. Not Times Roman. Palatino? I dunno, but nowhere near big enough to be consistent with the brochure nor to sell the proposition.
The letter opens with a lot of romance about the Amazon. Good stuff usually, but with everything else so straightforward, why not get to the point. The “3rd Paragraph Rule” applies. (After writing your draft, look at the third paragraph. That’s often where the letter really gets traction and should be the opening.)
P.S. Also, odd to my direct marketer’s eye: No P.S.